sexta-feira, 23 de abril de 2010

DISASTER IN HISTORY

I went to my uncle's farm last year in january with my family.My mother was driving the car.
We stayed in a hostel during three days.It was very hot.During the day we decided to ride a horse when I broke my knee.I felt much pain.I lost many good things that I had to do.
So I stayed home while others bought a gift to give to my uncle.At night we ate pizza and drank wine.After dinner we gave the present the uncle who was very happy.We met and it was really good.

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  1. CORRECAO...

    I went to my uncle's farm last year in january with my family. My mother was (DRIVING) the car.
    We stayed in a hostel during three days.It (WAS) very hot.During the day we decided to ride a horse when I broke my knee.I felt much pain.I lost many good things that (I) had to (DO).
    So I stayed home while others (-) bought a gift to g(I)ve (TO)my uncle.At night we ate pizza and drank wine.After dinner we gave the present the uncle who was very happy.We met (AND IT) was really good.

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